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Reject or approve?

Apr 12, 2022, 4:43 AM

it has originality but not enough club details

Visited: Monday Afternoon Dancers: 1-5 $ Spent: $300-$500 Lespwa Fè Viv How lucky was I? To focus my time Scant else to clutter the mind

But finding a muse Before beer no 2? Then moving like somehow she knew

Well, that’s quite close being The darn sweetest thing even A fumbling fool could adore (And the impression could not be ignored)

No doubt, you made me feel All sorts of things But more important’ly… …to stop when life just wants you to be And say Lespwa Fè Viv

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Icee Loco (asshole)3 years ago

Reject.

IfIGottaBeDamned3 years ago

Probably best as discussion on the club’s page.

wallanon3 years ago

Reject. I suggested they try to shape it up as an article.

Cashman12343 years ago

It’s not a traditional review - so I would reject it.

It is creative and interesting - and likely best posted on the club comments area.

grand15113 years ago

I hit reject on it

shailynn3 years ago

I’m here to know if I can get in a dancers g-string, not to read a poem about her! Lol

Longball3003 years ago

First poem review I've seen; needed just a few more club details and pricing and it would be a Yes from this judge.

gammanu953 years ago

No details, no publish.

Call.Me.Ishmael3 years ago

No.

doctorevil3 years ago

Creative, but not a review. No.

RTP3 years ago

I find it entertaining, so I would approve. What is the harm?

chunkychicano3 years ago

A review needs to include details. Descriptions of the dancers, the environment. The pricing, and most importantly the mileage. Was it just a regular grinding lapdance with boob and ass grabbing? Or were you able to smack her pussy and plunge a buttplug in and out of her asshole

rickdugan3 years ago

Flush.

drewcareypnw3 years ago

Writing a few lines in verse is easy, but writing something that stays in meter, rhymes, AND actually tells an interesting story is much more difficult.

Tetradon3 years ago

No one has a right to get something approved. Write a good, proper review, or get rightfully voted down.

rattdog3 years ago

i'd say approve it. the guy did claim to spend between $300-500. like to know which club it was and get a chance to maybe even ask a question or two. who knows - maybe get a reply that's just as poetic as above?

gSteph3 years ago

Nah.

Papi_Chulo3 years ago

When I read it in the Unpublished list my thought was that he was just writing something long-enough to get approved and he had actually not gone to a club .

wallanon3 years ago

Is it still there? Would've thought it'd be settled by now one way or the other.