Reject or approve?
shadowcat
Atlanta suburb
it has originality but not enough club details
Visited: Monday Afternoon
Dancers: 1-5
$ Spent: $300-$500
Lespwa Fè Viv
How lucky was I?
To focus my time
Scant else to clutter the mind
But finding a muse
Before beer no 2?
Then moving like somehow she knew
Well, that’s quite close being
The darn sweetest thing even
A fumbling fool could adore
(And the impression could not be ignored)
No doubt, you made me feel
All sorts of things
But more important’ly…
…to stop when life just wants you to *be*
And say Lespwa Fè Viv
Visited: Monday Afternoon
Dancers: 1-5
$ Spent: $300-$500
Lespwa Fè Viv
How lucky was I?
To focus my time
Scant else to clutter the mind
But finding a muse
Before beer no 2?
Then moving like somehow she knew
Well, that’s quite close being
The darn sweetest thing even
A fumbling fool could adore
(And the impression could not be ignored)
No doubt, you made me feel
All sorts of things
But more important’ly…
…to stop when life just wants you to *be*
And say Lespwa Fè Viv
19 comments
It is creative and interesting - and likely best posted on the club comments area.