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Reject or approve?

shadowcat
Atlanta suburb
it has originality but not enough club details

Visited: Monday Afternoon
Dancers: 1-5
$ Spent: $300-$500
Lespwa Fè Viv
How lucky was I?
To focus my time
Scant else to clutter the mind

But finding a muse
Before beer no 2?
Then moving like somehow she knew

Well, that’s quite close being
The darn sweetest thing even
A fumbling fool could adore
(And the impression could not be ignored)

No doubt, you made me feel
All sorts of things
But more important’ly…
…to stop when life just wants you to *be*
And say Lespwa Fè Viv

19 comments

  • Icee Loco (asshole)
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    2 years ago
    Reject.
  • IfIGottaBeDamned
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    2 years ago
    Probably best as discussion on the club’s page.
  • wallanon
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    2 years ago
    Reject. I suggested they try to shape it up as an article.
  • Cashman1234
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    2 years ago
    It’s not a traditional review - so I would reject it.

    It is creative and interesting - and likely best posted on the club comments area.
  • grand1511
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    2 years ago
    I hit reject on it
  • shailynn
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    2 years ago
    I’m here to know if I can get in a dancers g-string, not to read a poem about her! Lol
  • Longball300
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    2 years ago
    First poem review I've seen; needed just a few more club details and pricing and it would be a Yes from this judge.
  • gammanu95
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    2 years ago
    No details, no publish.
  • Call.Me.Ishmael
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    2 years ago
    No.
  • doctorevil
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    2 years ago
    Creative, but not a review. No.
  • RTP
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    2 years ago
    I find it entertaining, so I would approve. What is the harm?
  • rickmacrodong
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    2 years ago
    A review needs to include details. Descriptions of the dancers, the environment. The pricing, and most importantly the mileage. Was it just a regular grinding lapdance with boob and ass grabbing? Or were you able to smack her pussy and plunge a buttplug in and out of her asshole
  • rickdugan
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    2 years ago
    Flush.
  • drewcareypnw
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    2 years ago
    Writing a few lines in verse is easy, but writing something that stays in meter, rhymes, AND actually tells an interesting story is much more difficult.
  • Tetradon
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    2 years ago
    No one has a right to get something approved. Write a good, proper review, or get rightfully voted down.
  • rattdog
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    2 years ago
    i'd say approve it. the guy did claim to spend between $300-500. like to know which club it was and get a chance to maybe even ask a question or two. who knows - maybe get a reply that's just as poetic as above?
  • gSteph
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    2 years ago
    Nah.
  • Papi_Chulo
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    2 years ago
    When I read it in the Unpublished list my thought was that he was just writing something long-enough to get approved and he had actually not gone to a club .
  • wallanon
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    2 years ago
    Is it still there? Would've thought it'd be settled by now one way or the other.
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