Good story but it's unfinished. Here's this loser guy, who has yet to engage in life, and he has an attraction for a beautiful girl who has a lot more on the ball than just looks. It would be nice if the author made the plot then go somewhere.
Hesperia might as well be Smallville, Kansas. It's a shithole. Most if the girls from there are gonna be pregnant at 16. So it's ripe for raising strippers
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I doubt she's "rich" when nobody even talks about her "dance studio"