Good story but it's unfinished. Here's this loser guy, who has yet to engage in life, and he has an attraction for a beautiful girl who has a lot more on the ball than just looks. It would be nice if the author made the plot then go somewhere.
Hesperia might as well be Smallville, Kansas. It's a shithole. Most if the girls from there are gonna be pregnant at 16. So it's ripe for raising strippers
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last commentI think we all were at one time or anouther (what we thought) were in love with a stripper.
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My rule is that if I haven't seen her outside the club, it's lust. If I have seen her outside the club, it's probably still lust :-)
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Ouch is all I have to say.
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Good story but it's unfinished. Here's this loser guy, who has yet to engage in life, and he has an attraction for a beautiful girl who has a lot more on the ball than just looks. It would be nice if the author made the plot then go somewhere.
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Good story, like rockstar said, I wanted more.
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I am soooooooo glad nothing like that has ever happened to me.
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Hesperia might as well be Smallville, Kansas. It's a shithole. Most if the girls from there are gonna be pregnant at 16. So it's ripe for raising strippers
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wow...he's an absolute loser. I never heard a more pathetic story. I'd honestly rather hear about wiley gangstas
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I looked up the book by the way. It's such shit it can sell for as little as 1¢ on amazon
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I doubt she's "rich" when nobody even talks about her "dance studio"
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