A Refresher on How to Write a Good Review
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Thursday, June 22, 2023 12:26 AM
I got an email from a member who had a review rejected. He sent me the following:
"Not being able to see a full review without the VIP, I have no idea what it should contain. All I see is the short snippet. Can you send me a full review in the email so I get a sense of what they look like?"
and he sent me his rejected review:
"Visited while waiting for a flight. @ 5 pm. No one dancing on stage. Girls were talking to what looked like regulars. Took a while to get a drink. I think I was just a little early for the evening crowd to fill arrive. Got the opportunity to chat with Mercury. Bought a few drinks and had an enjoyable lapdance. Dances pricey. $90 per 15 mins. No discount for longer. I’d go back."
Rather than sending him a sample, I gave him some pointers to help with his own review. I thought it might be helpful to share this with others.
Visited while waiting for a flight. @ 5 pm. No one dancing on stage.
How big was the stage? How big was the club? How was it laid out? Any privacy in the main room?
Girls were talking to what looked like regulars.
How many girls? Why did you think they looked like regulars?
Took a while to get a drink.
How long is a while? What did you order? How much was it? Were you seated at the bar or a table? Why did it take a while? Were you ignored by the bartender or waitress?
I think I was just a little early for the evening crowd to fill arrive. Got the opportunity to chat with Mercury.
What did you chat about? What did she look like? What was she wearing?
Bought a few drinks and had an enjoyable lapdance.
How many drinks? How much were the drinks? More expensive for dancer drinks? What was enjoyable about the lapdance?
Dances pricey. $90 per 15 mins.
Where were the dances? In a private room? Out in the open? Was the dancer or management strict on the the time or contact?
No discount for longer. I’d go back.
Why specifically would you go back? From your review, I wouldn't know.
Hope this helps,
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