Doesn't fit Haiku form. Should have five syllables in first line, seven in second, and five in the last. This has one extra syllable in each line
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Doesn't fit Haiku form. Should have five syllables in first line, seven in second, and five in the last. This has one extra syllable in each line
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Dr E is right
All of your lines are too long
Haikus are not hard
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"You have lovely eyes!"
How could she tell from afar?
Eat a dick, you who're!
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Wow
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Yeah, I thought the format was words, not syllables.
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