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A Haiku

LecherousMonk
Mom's basement
"You have really nice eyes,"
How could she tell from over there?
Eat a dick, lying whore!

6 comments

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JuiceBox69
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7 years ago
LMFAO
doctorevil
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7 years ago
Doesn't fit Haiku form. Should have five syllables in first line, seven in second, and five in the last. This has one extra syllable in each line
MrDeuce
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7 years ago
Dr E is right
All of your lines are too long
Haikus are not hard
MrDeuce
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7 years ago
"You have lovely eyes!"
How could she tell from afar?
Eat a dick, you who're!
JuiceBox69
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7 years ago
Wow
LecherousMonk
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7 years ago
Yeah, I thought the format was words, not syllables.
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