A Haiku

6 comments

• JuiceBox69

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  7 years ago

  LMFAO
• doctorevil

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  7 years ago

  Doesn't fit Haiku form. Should have five syllables in first line, seven in second, and five in the last. This has one extra syllable in each line
• MrDeuce

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  7 years ago

  Dr E is right
  All of your lines are too long
  Haikus are not hard
  
• MrDeuce

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  7 years ago

  "You have lovely eyes!"
  How could she tell from afar?
  Eat a dick, you who're!
  
• JuiceBox69

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  7 years ago

  Wow
• LecherousMonk

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  7 years ago

  Yeah, I thought the format was words, not syllables.