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A Haiku

Aug 12, 2017, 3:33 AM
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LecherousMonk
Mom's basement

"You have really nice eyes," How could she tell from over there? Eat a dick, lying whore!

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JuiceBox69

LMFAO

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doctorevil

Doesn't fit Haiku form. Should have five syllables in first line, seven in second, and five in the last. This has one extra syllable in each line

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MrDeuce

Dr E is right All of your lines are too long Haikus are not hard

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MrDeuce

"You have lovely eyes!" How could she tell from afar? Eat a dick, you who're!

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JuiceBox69

Wow

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LecherousMonk

Yeah, I thought the format was words, not syllables.

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