Should I Write A Review That Actually Happened In A Club Known To Have Nothing S
alabegonz
The thing is, if I write my experience in a review fashion, that would separate my story from the normal, kinda like my version is not median but more skewed to the right (Good M).
Basically, this dancer asked me five bucks in addition to the bouncer tip she was about to give, so that the bouncer will look away and not pester us back in there. So I gave the five bucks and she went straight to the bouncer and passed the five bucks plus her tip.
Even before that, the way how she showed up and sat on my lap right away, she was like about to eat me alive. She took my shirt up exposing my pecs and she started sucking it, her hands were down there massaging my johnny. The waitress came back to my table with my order so I had to slowly pull the singles out of my pocket and pay her while the dancer kept ignoring the waitress. The waitress was watching us, I couldn't believe her she was watching like it was a show. My eyes were telling the waitress "Not my fault" and she just cracked a smile and walked away.
In the lapdance area, she was beyond crazy wild, the bouncer did not stop her from doing her thing, I think she came before the second song.
After that, she went away never to be seen again.
Another dancer sat beside me after ten minutes when I was back at my table, asked about what happened, I told her about it and she just LOL'ed saying "Good timing, I do that too that's why I asked about it, not very often I get that excited but when I get excited..."
I'll have to think about it whether I should write a review or not.
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Anyhow my point is that the review should be a review of the whole club and not just one incident.
If it's something that could get the club or the stripper in trouble, that's a separate issue and not what you appear to be asking about.
There is a bit of a fine line between a "story" and a "review" - and much rather read it as a review, but there's also a lot of gray area where the two overlap. Just make sure you've got enough of the basics in there to go along with your unusual experience and let readers decide for themselves.
I've always felt that those who really get along with the girls are not going to write about what happens. Also, I wouldn't want to risk drawing negative attention to a club.
SJG
Yes, there are certain generic things that should be included but other than that... It was your experience.
Don't name the dancer, because you might get her in trouble and, if that happens, no more of that experience for you. You might also want to be a little sly about specifics because I sometimes wonder if club managers keep tabs here and, if they are serious about adhering to certain standards, they might tighten the screws if they read about a certain specific act. (Probably less apt if you're at least somewhat sly.)
This is why I read at least three or four reviews of a club, at the very least, before checking it out. Experiences change and, obviously, even the best club can have some folks who run into a dud night while even the worst clubs can have one guy who just happened to have the night of his life and wrote a glowing review.
Remember, folks, if we had to pick a motto for this site, it would probably consist of four letters: YMMV.
"I shot my load into her quivering vagina, then watched that baby-batter dribble slowly out and down her thigh..."
etc.
I don't think it should go into a review unless you think it is relevant. Maybe it is more typical than you think.
SJG