My experience
Timex345
Illinois
Every so often I will post a review of a recent visit to a showclub.
I am not a professional writer.
How can someone criticize my experience? I mean, they weren't there.
It is my experience.
I have noticed the biggest critics on this website rarely post reviews themselves.
I am not a professional writer.
How can someone criticize my experience? I mean, they weren't there.
It is my experience.
I have noticed the biggest critics on this website rarely post reviews themselves.
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If I'm going to go to a strip club I don't care about your relationship with a dancer, that tells me nothing about the club. If I'm going to a club, tell me about dancers who give good mileage, the range in looks and ethnicitiesof all dancers, cost of entry, dances and drinks. Criticize when it's necessary, praise when appropriate but don't go overboard either way. We've all had good days and bad days at our favorite clubs. I think we all just look for objectivity. You can give us some perspective of the girl, but most guys don't care about the problems you have with her personally.
Just my two cents.
I read a few of your reviews, and they describe your experience in detail, and that's good. In my opinion - there should be two separate areas to post experiences. There should be a place to review a club - and basically state the facts of the club - so new clubbers know what to expect when planning a trip. There should also be an area to describe recent trips - so you can offer your opinion about what happened during your visit (drama - new DS talent - etc).
Would you rather have someone say the mileage was good or describe the mileage they received. What one customer considers a good time another may not.
The real issue is, can you engage in front room friendliness, GFE auditions?
Not interested in 'mileage' or 'extras'. I want it to be like it is in the TJ Hong Kong Bar, and like it is in the most extreme of Black Dives in the US, and like it is in the most extreme of the Mixed Race Dives in the US.
SJG
@sjg
Okay then....
Wouldn't a description of someone's experience of whatever it is that you are talking about be better than just saying that it is good?
I've hesitated to provide reviews on several clubs since the reviews are all dated - and my reviews aren't as current as the current date - and I don't want to mislead others.
I am writing / drafting my other reviews now, and I am trying to improve them before they are submitted. At first I read through minnow's reviews (which was the style I am aiming for) but then I started reading through desertscub's reviews, so see if there was room for improvement.
I guess, if I was back in college, I would ask the professor for some examples of 'A' work, so I can see what the "hive mind" here at TUSCL is looking for in a review.
shadowcat --> "I had a review rejected because they thought that it was more of personal experience than a review of the club. I rewrote it and it was accepted." --> end quote shadowcat
Can you elaborate slightly? If pure personal experience is a 1 and a pure review of the club is 2, should I shoot for 1.67?
Thanks!
Dominic
Yes of course it would be better. I think you are just starting to see how inadequate most reviews are.
SJG
SJG