New Article - First Visit to a Strip Club

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Call.Me.Ishmael
Rhode Island
https://www.tuscl.net/article.php5?id=57…

Someone is putting their classes in narrative journalism to good use.

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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Icey
6 years ago
He tries too hard .... it doesn't flow naturally.
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Call.Me.Ishmael
6 years ago
What a nitwit.
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Warrior15
6 years ago
^ For a second, I thought you were insulting the author of the article. Then I logged out and saw the repeated remarks of the Icey one. He is the definition of a nitwit.
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Warrior15
6 years ago
^^ I have Icey Dodo on Ignore.
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Call.Me.Ishmael
6 years ago
And in this episode of "Ignores Gone Wrong"...

Also, you are correct.
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Nidan111
6 years ago
Icey. You are wrong. Actually very well written. He only omitted ONE comma and placed INE comma in where not needed. Other than that, written to point of me seeing myself in that exact moment.
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Nidan111
6 years ago
INE = ONE
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