RENTS DUE... I read the posted note left on my door over and over... Dammit I yelled as i slammed my purse on the table. $30 bucks that't it! I lay my money on the table. Serving tables just isn't working.... The thump is loud as i walk into the joint. Holy shit this is it i cant believe i'm here. Hey said the manager in a deep voice. Hello I'm here for the audition. Great come back to the office as he walked off. Good evening said a voice from a behind a desk in the back. Simple questions followed until the interview became as real as i ever wanted. Well then stand up and take off your clothes the man said. I had a lump in my throat as i stood up shaking. Honey calm down you do want to do this right? Thinking of the post it note I nodded my head. Ok then he said as he nodded and smiled. Do you want me to dance i asked him? Honey i just want your dress off to make sure you look ok without clothes. As i raised the dress over my head i felt the wind hit my skin. My nipples became immediately hard as he let out a surprising DAMN!. I chuckled. I guess we can skip the bra and pantie stage fellas he laughed. I became red as i sat in front of him completely naked. I felt a hand as i was moved from my seat to his lap. Honey I know you need to make money but you need to make us.... I stopped him mid sentence I'm not going to... As i felt his large cock hit my leg. I gulped. Honey you will and you are... We can drag this out or just do it. I dropped to my knees. Oh shit he moans as I flick my tongue around the head of his fat cock. Ever increasing with speed and depth i take it more deep in my mouth. Eventually I let go as he forces it into my mouth over and over as i gag. Reality sets in quickly as i feel him enter into my wet pussy. Grinding slow until he was all the way inside of me. Your gonna do just fine here hunny he whispered as he continued to use my sweet tight pussy. One by one they welcomed me to the club each manager using my holes for their needs. Finally with each loud grunt i felt them unload inside me. Warm as it hit my insides i jumped with each one. Finally as i fell to my knees... spent....tired... Get yourself cleaned up i heard the one say. Your on in ten baby... I smiled and whispered... theres the rent as i started to wipe off....
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Nicely done. It’s filthy - and it’s real. It’s that steam of consciousness thought process that I like. When you read this - you need to strap in for the ride - as you don’t know where it’s going.
Lucky fucks! Getting a piece of your gorgeous wet pussy lips!
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I like your dirty mind PD.
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That's sum good fiction; well done.
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Awesome! Makes me want a job as a strip club manager!
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thanks guys
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The sad part is, that story has happened to many women.
PD - Good story. Made me feel what the woman was feeling and have empathy for her.
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I enjoyed that....come over to switter.at and socialize with us....share some of those stories...you might get tipped.
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wonder how i can get a club manager gig?
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Nice. Next time you're short on rent just start sending a bunch of "hey" texts. Good fiction PD. Keep them coming.
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This is exactly how I have always imagined strip club auditions. Thanks for the story.
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I hope that wasn't your audition! Keep them coming :)
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Good stuff, Pole. I read it between sets at the gym and honestly started to feel slightly erect picturing that (yeah, I know, I need to get laid).
I wrote some fiction back in the day that was published on a couple defunct sites, White Shadow’s Nasty Stories and Speculumpages.
I’d recommend flushing them out a little more details. I always found the humiliation/submission/blackmail aspects to be the most erotic, especially in porn.
Look forward to your next “submission.”
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I liked this one, too. It felt and read both raw. Ditto on the stream of consciousness feel to it. I could feel for the protagonist as she went deeper and deeper into the rabbit hole. I felt the pacing was good and you give sufficient detail for me to imagine what she's seeing and feeling. It kept me interesting and reading. Good job!
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I usually pass on erotic stories but this got me hooked. And a little raise in my shorts.
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