article comment
13 years ago
Thank you for your comments & good wishes. There are more seductive stories coming :)
article comment
13 years ago
LOL!!! I just love all of the complements. Wow!!! I'm going to get a big head.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
I will have to find more interesting places that people can relate to for my next few stories. It was a lot of fun using the sundial as so many people are familiar with the restaurant.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you. If it wasnt so damn expensive I would use a editor for everything. One day i will be able to do that, I have another sexy story coming soon. I have given it to my editor and am waiting for it to be returned. One day I'll put all of my erotic stories in a book of short stories.
Once again, thank you for all of the complements.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you so much. My editor is truly amazing.
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you guys ;)
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you so much. I have to give a big thanks to my editor. As. Know from my other writings I couldn't do it without her.
article comment
13 years ago
Awe .... Your so sweet to say that.
article comment
13 years ago
Thanks guys. I have some sexy stories coming soon. Your are sure to need a lot of lotion and a strong hand LOL!!!
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
The most critical inviroment, yet the most enjoyable.
Thank you all for your comments. I truly appreciate it.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Minow, what a great comment. I can see you are a realist where as this story is more on the fantasy/ fiction list. So through my fantasy world this is how I saw it. Think of stories like Alice in wonderland or Edward sisor hands. All were fantastic fantasys with zero reality As far as my children go, well I have to say they had nothing to do with the story. I will take all of the credit for bad gramer & misspelled words. After all I'm still learning and writing is. Wry difficult for me because of the learning disorder & dilslexia I have. I'm facing my fears of writing and having them published in what is the m
article comment
13 years ago
I want to thank all of you so very much. I love constructive criticism. If I didn't listen to it I would be know where in my life today. I have owned many businesses over the years in the beauty industry. With each business I was often discouraged because of my learning disorder & dislexia, but I not one to let anything or anyone stop me. The people, such as yourselves that give me advice are the people that have enriched my life and increase my knolage through school & personal study. I have a long way to go as you can see. Writing is by far the most chalanging thing for me to do, which is why I'm doing it. Thanks again :)
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you for the comment. Maybe that's why founder wasn't going to publish it. I am going to take some classes when I can afford to what did you think of the story in general ?
article comment
13 years ago
Love the comments. And to answer the questions, yes it was a rough medifor to something I had gone though a couple of years ago.
The chains bound her was me being trapped in a decision between to lovers as to which man I would choose to have a relationship with. I had fallen in love with both of them but didn't want to choose between them.
The dragons and demons was my emotional turmoil over the situation. They both new about the other and were both trying to love me into marriage. I could of written a very spicy yet wonderful love story of all of the events that took place as the 3 of us went on this magical jorney together. It would be a story that most people would think was fiction. I certainly could have never written a sceen play so beautifully. It had all of the sex, drama and excitement any any great writer or reader could ever want.
I ended up choosing one only to find myself enjoying both of them once again. Now we are all friends and enjoy an occational romp in the hay here and there with them But Wow!!!! What an exciting journey it had been.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you guys for all of the great comments
article comment
13 years ago
Rlionheart, wow... thank you for your comment. I am fairly new at writing and certainly have a lot to learn. I love your insight and had never thought about weaving the stories together. Interesting idea. I have several other stories waiting to be posted. I can't wait to hear what you have to say about them.
As for you my dear10 inches, no I was not on drives. Just intoxicated by the evening. Thank you for your commen.
article comment
13 years ago
I guess u could say a little reality is in there. It was written during a wild & sad time of my life. But mostly it is fiction as far as the metaphor goes.The other stories I have coming soon were written around the same time which was about a year & a half.
Thank you for asking.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you so much Deogol, as well as the rest of you. I know this is a huge change from my other stories, but I thought it would be interesting to see how you guys would respond to them.
I have about 5 or 6 more waiting to be approved. They are simple, some are very frantic and some are feel good stories.
Thanks again guys, for your comments.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
I have posted several stories which should come out soon, once they have been reviewed. I hope you enjoy them. They are very different than the stories you are use to reading from me.
By the way, I have not been able to purchase a new phone yet, so please forgive me for the long delays between writing. Gosh I miss my phone.
article comment
13 years ago
Boys ... you move me with your romantic comments. I have been going through a bit of a battle inside myself about being overly explicit both at the club and in my stories. In fact, working at Follies has begun to really bother me with the overly aggressive touching (I certainly encouraged it by the way). I guess you could say I need to be treated special without the constant, EXTREME, sexual comments and behavior. Now don't get me wrong, I'm not becoming Mother Teresa, I'm just calming things down a bit.
I have changed clubs. I am now at Mardi Gras and love it. There is not a lot of touching there except by me which for me is great. A lot of the guys at Follies were very rough and would offten hurt me. I feel a bit more protected at this club. While at Follies, I felt more like a prostitute than a dancer. Sadly .... I guess I was. I am past that now though.
I'm sure after reading this, a lot of you guys will become disinterested quickly. Who knows, maybe when it comes down to it, guys prefer to go to a high milage club, as Shadowcat calls it, where they can have sex for a bargain price with no interest in the other type of club.
Oh well, I'm more about giving the sensual girlfriend experience, the fantasy, changing things up all of the time to keep it interesting, being very flirty and playful, that's what makes it fun for me and hopefully you as well.
So .... let me know your thoughts. I would love it if you were completely honest with me, which by the way would not offend me at all, and tell me what you think about my more conservative approach. How would you personally feel about it if it were you in the chair and I was dancing for you????
Can't wait to hear your answers :)
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you B ill
article comment
13 years ago
Good Morning Gentlemen,
What a way to wake up to all of thsee delightful comments. I have to admit reading what Art and George wrote made me feel so good. Art & George, you two especially have warmed my heart with your style of your writing. You write as if you are writing a beautiful fair tale with unicorns, fairies, princes and dragons. I have to tell you that Larry is a wonderful writer also. .
I look forward to your continued comments and private messages.
By the way, my phone as well as my wallet were stolen at the club last night so I will not be able to respond as quickly as usual but will hopefully be able to get an old phone connected soon.
Thank you all for all of the kindness you have shared.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Thank you gorge for your honesty. I do relize that is the case. After all I'm a stipper on a site with a bunch of horney guys. If it wasn't for the desires of all of you lovely gentlemen, I would not have a job. The reason for the bio was because I figured it might be nice to see who the girl is behind the mask :). As you can see from the lack of responses there is not a great deal of interest for people to really know who I am, which is quite alright I might add. But for the few such as yourself, it might be kind Of interesting.
Thank you for taking the time to get to know me and writing a comment. It means a lot. Have an amazing day :)
article comment
13 years ago
I can not begin to tell you guys how much you make me smile. Every time I get a message I'm thrilled to death. All of you are so very kind to me.
Christal
article comment
13 years ago
Shadowcat, yes I am still working on Sunday from 1-8. I just bought a house & have taken time off to settle in, but I am back now.
Loonearry, I would love to re-enact ghost with you. That was o e of my favorite scenes. What a great movie that was.