DolfanToo Explicit
Not Enough Details
I know, not enough details & too explicit at the same time is contradictory, but don't call out the girls name for providing extras, it's bad form. Thats the too explicit part.
Also, a little more about the dancers and costs would be useful. Were they young & slim, fat & old, hot or ugly, etc. Costs for anything? Parking, Cover, Table dances? Lap Dances? Don't have to 100% cover everything, but suggest you add a little more so the next try doesn't get rejected for not enough details.