My First Review: Lessons And Lusting In Ohio

Adjudicator notes

• wallanonApproved·TL;DR. Half of this could've been an article. Saw enough to upvote. You should read more reviews by more reviewers to figure out a style that works with what you're trying to say in fewer words. Clearly you put the time and effort in, but it's much too much. If you hadn't split this into sections I'd have rejected it.
• OnetoomanyFlagged·Not Enough Club Details lol
• ElectronmanApproved·Too many details! Just kidding. Thanks for the excellent review.
• grand1511Flagged·Incoherent Way too long