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looking for feedback on a poem. i have thick skin any feedback is appreciated.

WILLYSGOTAWOMAN

New Jersey

"Semon’s Demon’s"

So I’m smoking crack in the back of the shack with Jack when the anticipated moment arrives. Now let me tell you about my drives.

What about your wife?

I’ll kill her with a knife. I hate that bitch. She looks like a witch.

What about your wife?

Without her I’d take my life. She’s better than me. Can’t you see?

What about your wife?

Leave me alone. I don’t like your tone.

I can't disclose the actions of hoes. But a cum drum beat on the seat waiting for me to complete and schaboomabap I fell into the money trap. A one hundred dollar stained collar and white stickers in my black knickers.

You came in your pants?

I fell into a trance.

You’re disgusting. Why are you disrupting?

I hate myself too. But what should I do?

Stop hurting me.

It fills me with glee.

My dick my dick it makes me sick. My dick my dick it needs a trick. My dick my dick its such a prick.

I'll kill you.

Its not true. You won't. Your wife says don't. I make her cum not you. Without me your thru.

But I lover her.

You fucking idiot. Sex isn't about love. It's about biology. Now give me an apology.