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Too explicit for a review that even gives the dancer's name?

shadowcat
Atlanta suburb
"So we head back for a 45 minute session. She immediately takes my pants down and begins the best bj I've ever had. I spun her around and ran my tongue around her asshole. I put a finger inside her, and her bj got more aggressive, squeezing my balls and running her finger around my asshole. Two fingers inside her and now spreading her ass wider and wider. I pick her up and lay her on the couch face down and tell her to spread her ass. I slowly slide one finger in her pussy and continue to eat her ass. This goes on for a few minutes and she asks for my cum. I lay on my back and she get's in a 69 position. She continues sucking and jerking me off until I cum. I'm so charged up I come all over her stomach, tits, and even hit her chin a little."

18 comments

  • shailynn
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    9 years ago
    Did JS69 write that review?
  • snowtime
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    9 years ago
    I thought the same when I read the review. It would have been ok had he left out the dancer's name.
  • 4got2wipe
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    9 years ago
    Definitely sounds too explicit if the dancer's name was provided, but I will say "brilliant story!"
  • 4got2wipe
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    9 years ago
    Though I would have considered it more brilliant if she licked my butthole! ;)
  • vincemichaels
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    9 years ago
    Hmmm, was Gwen her name, shadowcat ??
  • tumblingdice
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    9 years ago
    No,I believe it was Carter.
  • shadowcat
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    9 years ago
    NO VM but Gwen missed you. :)
  • warhawks
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    9 years ago

    Sounds a little too Penthouse Forumish...
  • dw.buck
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    9 years ago
    post on SW cause theyswear up and down they dont do BS like this
  • RTP
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    9 years ago
    Not sure how this is a turn on at all for the person writing the article. I am a "whatever works" kind of person, but how is that enjoyable? This has to be as all stories on this site are, a work of fiction.

  • Papi_Chulo
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    9 years ago
    Where's the link to the review?
  • Papi_Chulo
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    9 years ago
    Nice to see you posting VM; hope you are doing well or at least better !!!
  • VeryBigDawg
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    9 years ago
    I have been there many times and it seemed like the guy gave a lot of "poetic license" in his review. Almost like he was trying to impress us with how nasty he could be.
  • goldmongerATL
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    9 years ago
    For a review with that much detail I would give the dancer's initial at most.
  • JohnSmith69
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    9 years ago
    Shailynn, you will never read about anybody's tongue in anybody's asshole in any of my sex stories.
  • 4got2wipe
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    9 years ago
    "Shailynn, you will never read about anybody's tongue in anybody's asshole in any of my sex stories."

    JohnSmith69, I'm going to give you a piece of 100% sincere advice. Just once, ask a girl to lick your butthole. Ask her to give you a serious rimjob! I'll make a bet that you'll love it!

    And for the person who says I post gay stuff I'd like to clarify that, if you're a man, having a woman lick your butthole is not gay. It's brilliant! ;)
  • chessmaster
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    9 years ago
    What's the sluts name?
  • s88
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    9 years ago
    @VeryBigDawg Quite a number of reviews aren't reviews but erotic literature. The writer is spanking his monkey right now thinking of another guy getting turned on by his sex stories. Nothing about a USA SC should sound like the plot from a porno. A bouncer will never sit down on your lap in the USA and say "I do BBBJ, CIM but not swallow, FS but no anal, dont you want these tits tonight honey?". I am expecting to soon read a review about glory holes in the VIP room. And after getting your dick sucked, when the dancer comes out of the next room, it is the 6 foot 250 lb ripped bouncer who patted you down for weapons at the door who was sucking your cock.
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