"So we head back for a 45 minute session. She immediately takes my pants down and begins the best bj I've ever had. I spun her around and ran my tongue around her asshole. I put a finger inside her, and her bj got more aggressive, squeezing my balls and running her finger around my asshole. Two fingers inside her and now spreading her ass wider and wider. I pick her up and lay her on the couch face down and tell her to spread her ass. I slowly slide one finger in her pussy and continue to eat her ass. This goes on for a few minutes and she asks for my cum. I lay on my back and she get's in a 69 position. She continues sucking and jerking me off until I cum. I'm so charged up I come all over her stomach, tits, and even hit her chin a little."
Too explicit for a review that even gives the dancer's name?
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I thought the same when I read the review. It would have been ok had he left out the dancer's name.
Definitely sounds too explicit if the dancer's name was provided, but I will say "brilliant story!"
Though I would have considered it more brilliant if she licked my butthole! ;)
Hmmm, was Gwen her name, shadowcat ??
No,I believe it was Carter.
NO VM but Gwen missed you. :)
Sounds a little too Penthouse Forumish...
post on SW cause theyswear up and down they dont do BS like this
Not sure how this is a turn on at all for the person writing the article. I am a "whatever works" kind of person, but how is that enjoyable? This has to be as all stories on this site are, a work of fiction.
Where's the link to the review?
Nice to see you posting VM; hope you are doing well or at least better !!!
I have been there many times and it seemed like the guy gave a lot of "poetic license" in his review. Almost like he was trying to impress us with how nasty he could be.
For a review with that much detail I would give the dancer's initial at most.
Shailynn, you will never read about anybody's tongue in anybody's asshole in any of my sex stories.
"Shailynn, you will never read about anybody's tongue in anybody's asshole in any of my sex stories."
JohnSmith69, I'm going to give you a piece of 100% sincere advice. Just once, ask a girl to lick your butthole. Ask her to give you a serious rimjob! I'll make a bet that you'll love it!
And for the person who says I post gay stuff I'd like to clarify that, if you're a man, having a woman lick your butthole is not gay. It's brilliant! ;)
What's the sluts name?
@VeryBigDawg Quite a number of reviews aren't reviews but erotic literature. The writer is spanking his monkey right now thinking of another guy getting turned on by his sex stories. Nothing about a USA SC should sound like the plot from a porno. A bouncer will never sit down on your lap in the USA and say "I do BBBJ, CIM but not swallow, FS but no anal, dont you want these tits tonight honey?". I am expecting to soon read a review about glory holes in the VIP room. And after getting your dick sucked, when the dancer comes out of the next room, it is the 6 foot 250 lb ripped bouncer who patted you down for weapons at the door who was sucking your cock.
Did JS69 write that review?