Laid back Sunday night

Adjudicator notes

• tusclApproved·ROB PLACE with inconsistent prices. stay the fuck away
• ElectronmanFlagged·Incoherent You contradict yourself: "I didn't end up going for a dance this night but the previous time I went it was pretty standard affair, $20 a song was advertised but the girl said since it was the weekend it was $25, only took her for 2 songs and didn't really feel like it was worth it. " Did you get a dance? Describe the dance facilities and mileage. Wheere did your buddy go for what sounds like a dance that cost $125? If this is rejected, you might consider writing more clearly about the private dance experience and removing some repetition (maybe just one mention of "inconsistent" and one mention of the days of the week) before you resubmit it.