PapaBearNot Enough Details
I appreciate the review, but you'll need more info.
Did you do the dance booths or the VIP area? What was the cost? Did you do 15 mins? 30 mins?
Did you see any other girls working? Did you get drinks? Also helpful to describe some elements of the club, like what it looks like, where it is in town, etc.
If you do that you should be able to get it published. Best of luck - PB
