DolfanNot Enough Details
Too Explicit
Incoherent
You somehow said too much without saying anything. Read the review guidelines before trying again.
Don' tie specific girls to specific acts. Billy Joel isn't fooling anyone, if you want to say you got a blow job that's fine. Just don't call out Gabrielle by name.
Try to provide additional details. Doesn't have to be every single thing in the club, but tell us about costs for parking/entry/dances/rooms/extras/drinks. Or tell us more about the girls, the stage dances, the lap dances, etc. Topless on stage? Nude? Enthusiastic, just going through the motions. Hopefully you get the idea. I wrote more rejecting your review than you did submitting it.
