Wool Dolls

Adjudicator notes

• ElectronmanFlagged·Not Enough Club Details Incoherent Rewrite to make this more understandable to the reader. I try to visualize what this means: "Walk up two guys. Vax card and ID. Walk in. Cover is $25 for a door lady." Were the two guys the "wackadoodles" that you reference or were they they club security who checked for your VAX card and ID. Do more than say "I didn't like this group." The readers have no idea why you didn't like this group. Were they ugly, smelly, smoky, loud and bitchy, etc. etc. Either state what you like/don't like or describe the dancers so that others can draw their own conclusions about likeability. Any information on the stage show? Any information on the private dance facilities and mileage?
• joewebberFlagged·Not Enough Club Details