Still a sure thing

Adjudicator notes

• TechmanApproved·Length of "fun time" for $300-400?
• ElectronmanFlagged·Incoherent Confusing. At one point you say "VIP fees are $25 per visit. I didn't get a dance so I don't know for sure." Later you describe a trip to the VIP with a dancer. You might also describe whether you negotiated the dancer fee or whether you paid whatever she requested. I ask because you and usually negotiate a slightly lower price when the club is slow. Please clarify and resubmit.