ElectronmanI like to encourage dancers and other women to contribute reviews, so I am reluctant to reject this write up. Unfortunately, it is not really a club review but an account of a person's experience with "amateur night" and is really a warning to other dancers.
If you wanted to rewrite the review to add some more general details that would be of interest to potential customers, then you could include a brief section on your experience as a competitor in this so called amateur night. Consider adding descriptions of cost of admission, describe the talent and stage show, describe the private dance facilities and costs.