Will It Pass Muster?

First review was rejected because of paragraph breaks...

I'll start a new one here. Also, 'not enough details' and too many details from another adjudicator who is very smart and 'Everyone knows the extras you're talking about. At least you're not using the overused Billy Joel or Frank Sinatra. But keep that shit to PMs.' Lol.

So I'll start a new paragraph and give you generic information about a club that has been described to death. This place is very dark. The cover is $11 which includes a soft drink. No alcohol is allowed. The club layout: there are two stages perpendicular to each other. Only one stage facing the center was being used. The other stage is on the right. There are some darker booth areas by the second stage. If you follow the walkway from the entrance past the bar area, it runs into the hallway where the VIP rooms are.