Making a Run for Best Club in NJ Again

Adjudicator notes

• TechmanFlagged·Not Enough Club Details Cost of "PG-13 dances"?
• Pussylicker2Approved·It's NOT "cant", it's "can't", "I'm", not "Im", "won't" not "wont" Do the "news girls" read the newspaper to you, or did you mean "new girls"? "...what happened but in the past month but they have recruited..." - the second "but" shouldn't be there. If "its" is being used in place of "it is", it should be "it's". "its" is possessive, like "his" or "her". Trust me, there are more grammar errors. One thing that helps is to proofread before clicking. It really is important. I approved it anyway because there is good information and it is readable, albeit with difficulty.