Akron Dive Bar Crawl #3

Adjudicator notes

• joker44Flagged·Not Enough Club Details no need to write a novel just follow review guidelines 😛 content and length are the two most important factors to consider. Be wordy. Fill the review box. One or two sentence reviews aren't helpful to anyone. Give a LOT of details in your review (club layout, atmosphere, dance quality, etc.). no adequate description of working dancers, LD area layout incoherent because meager info on Lusty is filled out with comments about other clubs. As written this is a strip club list 'review' or Yelp quality
• ElectronmanFlagged·Not Enough Club Details This is one of four submitted reviews where the author refuses to describe the bar. The lines were either, "I will not write a novel describing the bar since it has been describes in other reviews." or "If you want me to write a novel for get it. This place has been described many times before." That might be acceptable if the reviews contained other useful information. However, each review consists solely of a brief description of his interaction with one or more dancers. So, let me return the favor and copy and paste the same comment in all 4 reviews. The purpose of a review is to be helpful to others who have not been to this particular club. Some focus on specific dancers can be helpful but the readers will not know these specific dancer names so describe the dancers and the club experience in a manner that others can understand. As written, the only valuable information seems to be that the talent is sketchy but the mileage is high. I don't know if others will find these "reviews" to be publishable but I do not. If you're willing to write a more helpful review, then please do so and resubmit.